【词】虞美人.<乡思>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 18.75pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan"><SPAN class=content1><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma">晴川<SPAN class=content1><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma">芳草</SPAN></SPAN>寻常梦</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US><FONT face=Tahoma>,</FONT></SPAN></SPAN></P><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 18.75pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan"><SPAN class=content1><SPAN lang=EN-US></SPAN></SPAN><SPAN class=content1><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma">往事和春共。</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com<img src=" /><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 18.75pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan"><SPAN class=content1><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma">少年意气贯斗牛，</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 18.75pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan"><SPAN class=content1><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma">携侣中流击水、遏飞舟</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US><FONT face=Tahoma>……<o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></SPAN></P>
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<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 18.75pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan"><SPAN class=content1><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma">烟波黄鹤笛声杳</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US><FONT face=Tahoma>,<o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 18.75pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan"><SPAN class=content1><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma">垅上梅开早</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US><FONT face=Tahoma>?<o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 18.75pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan"><SPAN class=content1><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma">且将功名付黄粱</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US><FONT face=Tahoma>,<o:p></o:p></FONT></SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 18.75pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan"><SPAN class=content1><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma">疾乘东风驾鹤、好还乡。</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P>
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<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 18.75pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan"><SPAN class=content1><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma">自译：梦中常常感觉，自己在白云悠悠之际，登黄鹤古楼，面晴川芳草，看大江东去，儿时的往事仿若眼前。在家乡的时光总是那么美好，总是充满春日的阳光。</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 18.75pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan"><SPAN class=content1><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma">那时，少年不知愁滋味，对未来充满着幻想。因家住长江边，向毛伟人一样：击水中流，浪遏飞舟，实属寻常（不敢指点江山）。</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 18.75pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan"><SPAN class=content1><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma">岁月沧桑，世事茫茫，朦胧中的黄鹤随仙人子安远去，记忆中的笛声伴童年时光杳然。今天，驰名的江城梅花，是否早开？无虑的青春年华，是否再来？</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 18.75pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan"><SPAN class=content1><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma">唉！暂且将名利抛却一边吧，趁现在国泰民安，邀子安一同驾黄鹤，回家吧！</SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 18.75pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan"><SPAN class=content1><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma"></SPAN></SPAN> </P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 18.75pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan"><SPAN class=content1><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma">后记：这是本人第一首词，纯属学习。至所以“自译”是因为怕“词”不达意，并通过“自译”盼宗亲从形式到内容给予指正。</SPAN></SPAN></P>
[ 本帖最后由 徐绘龙 于 2009-3-4 11:28 编辑 ] 兴趣是最好的老师.... 烟波黄鹤笛声杳,垅上梅开早?
好！赞一个。 诗人,比如毛伟人,好象一般都不自译的,随便别人猜去,猜来猜去连自己都忘了当初要表达的是什么;P <P>原帖由 <I>徐小安</I> 于 2009-3-4 11:24 发表 <A href="http://www.xu-shi.com/bbs/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=129283&ptid=26171" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.xu-shi.com/bbs/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A> 诗人,比如毛伟人,好象一般都不自译的,随便别人猜去,猜来猜去连自己都忘了当初要表达的是什么;P </P>
<P>本人非伟人，故自译；本人怕言不达意，故自译；本人怕自己都忘了，故自译。见笑了。</P>
<P>谢各位。</P> 烟波黄鹤笛声杳,
垅上梅开早?
且将功名付黄粱,
疾乘东风驾鹤、好还乡。
好词，赞一个。
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