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徐德勤 发表于 2009-5-18 08:33

七绝四首

<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 18pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-line-height-rule: exactly" align=center><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'"><FONT color=deepskyblue size=5><STRONG>七绝四首</STRONG></FONT></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 18pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-line-height-rule: exactly" align=center><FONT color=deepskyblue><STRONG><FONT size=5><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">小序：</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US><FONT face="Times New Roman">2007</FONT></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">年</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US><FONT face="Times New Roman">7</FONT></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">月</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US><FONT face="Times New Roman">23</FONT></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'">日晨，忽见西天半壁，乌云滚滚而来，俄倾电闪雷鸣，大雨倾盆而下，对面不见人。吾在街上，见行人及己之狼狈相，不觉有所感悟，遂随口吟成四绝以记之。</SPAN></FONT></STRONG></FONT></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 18pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-line-height-rule: exactly" align=center><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'"><FONT color=deepskyblue size=5><STRONG>一</STRONG></FONT></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 18pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-line-height-rule: exactly" align=center><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'"><FONT color=deepskyblue size=5><STRONG>西天滚滚翻墨云，恰如江海蛟龙腾。</STRONG></FONT></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 18pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-line-height-rule: exactly" align=center><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'"><FONT color=deepskyblue size=5><STRONG>风吹黑浪三千里，挟闪依雷放胆行。</STRONG></FONT></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 18pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-line-height-rule: exactly" align=center><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'"><FONT color=deepskyblue size=5><STRONG>二</STRONG></FONT></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 18pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-line-height-rule: exactly" align=center><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'"><FONT color=deepskyblue size=5><STRONG>俄顷大雨落滂沱，万箭齐来不为多。</STRONG></FONT></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 18pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-line-height-rule: exactly" align=center><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'"><FONT color=deepskyblue size=5><STRONG>眼前一片迷茫色，叱咤喑呜雨之歌。</STRONG></FONT></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 18pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-line-height-rule: exactly" align=center><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'"><FONT color=deepskyblue size=5><STRONG>三</STRONG></FONT></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 18pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-line-height-rule: exactly" align=center><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'"><FONT color=deepskyblue size=5><STRONG>满街风雨满街雷，一伞擎天气力微。</STRONG></FONT></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 18pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-line-height-rule: exactly" align=center><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'"><FONT color=deepskyblue size=5><STRONG>小童涉水双腿抖，丢下惊魂去不回。</STRONG></FONT></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 18pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-line-height-rule: exactly" align=center><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'"><FONT color=deepskyblue size=5><STRONG>四</STRONG></FONT></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 18pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-line-height-rule: exactly" align=center><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'"><FONT color=deepskyblue size=5><STRONG>一声霹雳天地惊，满耳轰轰是雷声。</STRONG></FONT></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 18pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-line-height-rule: exactly" align=center><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'"><FONT color=deepskyblue size=5><STRONG>雨借声威风借胆，滔滔一泻满乾坤。</STRONG></FONT></SPAN></P>

徐卫发表于 2009-5-18 11:03

好文笔，有意境。顶!!!

徐焕友 发表于 2009-5-18 13:46

小序：2007年7月23日晨，忽见西天半壁，乌云滚滚而来，俄倾电闪雷鸣，大雨倾盆而下，对面不见人。吾在街上，见行人及己之狼狈相，不觉有所感悟，遂随口吟成四绝以记之　　不是很懂，得换成现代语

徐镇邦 发表于 2009-5-20 00:23

顶一下!支持好文章以及词当然要顶,并且是原创.谢谢楼主的分享:handshake

滔滔一泻(谐)满乾坤

徐德勤 发表于 2009-5-21 08:08

感谢各位宗亲的支持！

徐毅骏 发表于 2009-5-21 09:17

<P>原帖由 <I>徐焕友</I> 于 2009-5-18 13:46 发表 <A href="http://bbs.xu-shi.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=149938&ptid=30095" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://bbs.xu-shi.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A> 小序：2007年7月23日晨，忽见西天半壁，乌云滚滚而来，俄倾电闪雷鸣，大雨倾盆而下，对面不见人。吾在街上，见行人及己之狼狈相，不觉有所感悟，遂随口吟成四绝以记之　　不是很懂，得换成现代语 </P>
<P>这不是古语，是现代语。</P>

徐焕友 发表于 2009-5-21 21:04

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那就是我功底差，没办法，别笑话、、、:loveliness:

徐绘龙 发表于 2009-5-22 09:25

德勤大哥诗兴乘风雨大作！:)

徐北音 发表于 2010-11-10 12:32

文采飞扬{:6_159:}

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